my first ever deviantion!

okay i know it's quite screwed, but well that's because:

[1] my colour pencils suck. i'm saving up to buy nicer stuff, but meanwhile...

[2] the scanner's quite screwed. i'm using a school scanner for this, so i appologise. it's the only way i can get this here, short of, say, taking a picture of the picture.

[3] i honestly do not believe i can draw better than a lot of people on deviantart, but here's a shot at it.

background info on picture:
was going to draw this for my sister started off with the little doll in the centre, but somehow the doll turned emo or something and when i added the cloud with tears, i decided that it was too personal to give to her anymore. i guess i was just feeling a little down? :/

love it? hate it? hmm please please please comment on this picture! thank you very much please also tell me if the category is wrong.

love, snowdrop.tears